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« on: July 17, 2008, 08:34:31 pm »

it would be nice to have a section where we could post story we write (not obligated to be related to maple story)but since there are none i'm just gonna post the begining my story here

i dont really have a name to it yet  i'm opened to suggestions

                                    Prelude to a nightmare


Every thing at the hq was calm the mission was going well since there had been no transmissions from group H.
Colonel Williams was not feeling well, he had a bad feeling and was wandering what they were doing when the transmisson came in.
- captain jackson calling do you hear me, captain jackson calling can you hear me, please respond!
- williams here we hear you loud and clear, what's going on Bane?
- we've just been attack by ...well we're sending you a picture right now. The high lord will be interested in.... god there are more ... FIRE AT WILL THEY'VE BREACH THE PERIMITER!!!
- what's going on bane? ....BANE!
- THERE ARE TO MANY OF THEM SPLIT UP AND REGROUP AT POSITION B (there was the sound of a burst of bullets and then the connection was lost)
When Williams opened the image that had been sent he froze .GOD HELP US...GOD HELP THEM he tought.


                                    Attacked day 1

- Run!

Where ...Where am I ?
Why am I running? Why is my head bleeding so..so many questions and few answers.
Well from the looks of it i'm in a jungle but which one? I can also see someone in front of me.
But who is he ?
Ahhgg! My head !!! I got to stop thinking yes stop thinking.
Just follow this personne...stop thinking atleast for now...


                                    The cave day 7


One week, one week and still no answers, one week of running from.... something.
One week and I still dont know who he is, all i need to know for now is that he is an ...ally?
Who is he ? Obviously he wants me no harm, he finds food and he's got a knife what more... maybe I should talk to him ?

- What's wrong ?

His he talking to me ? Who else could he talk to... what's wrong? ...so ..so much is wrong at the moment.

- It's nothing

- Ya sure ?

- Yes

Wait why am saying that i'm fine ? I am most certainly NOT fine.
Say something!! but it's to late he's already gone looking for some food.
Why did I say i was fine ?
Anyway he'll be gone for atleast half an hour time to examine my self.
Gently sliding my fingers upon my legs i find many bruises nothing dangerous
But when I start to examine my uper body I find two deep wounds the one baring my chest isn't that bad
But the one on my right arm will infect if I dont clean it.
Looking around the area i find a little puddle of clean water between some big rocks.
After carefully cleaning my wounds I go back in the cave where we took refuge and try to get some rest.


                                    The cave day 10


John... his name is John.
I still dont know from what we are running but I've learned few things.
John and I were part of a group ... group H, we were sent on a reckon mission in the gula (that's the name of the forest we're in)
to comfirm the sighting of hostile forces, now apparently we were attacked by some sort of creatures John had never seen before.
We had to leave all our equipement behind just to be able to run away and during the melee I was hit on the head. He thinks this is what caused my memorie loss.
Some elements are still unclear like if any one else survived but for now this will have to do.


                                    The tree day 12


I'm wet... I'm cold... but atleast i'm alive.
Two days ago John came back to the cave and i knew something was wrong when i noticed that he was almost running.
he threw me a handgun, when he saw my puzzled face he explained that he had went back to the camp where we had been attacked to look for something to salvage.
Unfortunatly he was spotted by ... the things and they started chassing him .
He managed to lose them but he didn't know for how long so we packed our stuff(almost nothing so it was quick)and ran away ...again.
We found a big tree on the edge of a cliff that was easely defendable abd we've camped ther for the last two day expecting an attack at any time.


                                    The tree day 14


Today some peices of my memorie came back to me in short flashes.
My name is Bane Jackson and i'm a captain in the high lords army.
Altough I now remember who I am, I also remember the face of every single friend I had in group H.
The fact of not knowing if they're still alive is killing me like a slow poison wich as far only cure  knowledge...knowledge i don't have.
But right now I only need to focus on one thing ...staying alive.


                                    The tree day 16


Damn that rain is unnatural.... how can it rain for 2 days non-stop.
and John still ain't back from his reckon
I can't see shit with this rain even that sniper's scope(it's gun John has found in the forest on one of his reckons)
and with that rain my fingers are so numb i can't feel them anymo..... what 's that?
it can't be john he wouldn't walk in the open like that
i cant identify it(not sure it's even human it's got three legs)
well sorry buddy but you're gon...... i feel the tip of a gun pushing on the back of my head...
- Nice camp you got here (what the...!!!???)

-Bill?

-how do you know my....CAPTAIN!!!!

-what the fuck are you doing here....

-same as you surviving to those monster ...now if you dont mind its jakobs you're aiming at
and you're doing it with is own rifle...and the guy even needs my assault rifle as a cane
(ahh so that's the third leg i'm seing)

-aahhh so that's how you found us you traced john's steps back here

- yeah and luckely for you we erased his by erasing ours so nothing else is gonna bother us.....wait john is here?...THAT BASTARD!!! he owns me 100 bucks....

-(laughter)

After all these days of stress bill's humor his more then welcome.... god know's we will need it in the next coming days
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« Reply #1 on: July 18, 2008, 11:01:17 am »

NOOO...DONT STOP...! Is there gonna be more o.O?
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« Reply #2 on: July 18, 2008, 05:10:25 pm »

added a chapter and i will try to do soo every day (or atleast every time i log in)

what do you think of my story ? don't hold back tell what you REALLY think
did you come up with a name?do you like the main caracter?
want more action? more dialogue? or more thought's?
what do you you think should happen next?
post all you want
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« Reply #3 on: July 18, 2008, 05:44:43 pm »

Lol I loved it xD Really. i cant stop readin it xD i already have read it like 5times already xD
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« Reply #4 on: July 18, 2008, 05:50:45 pm »

ty
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« Reply #5 on: July 18, 2008, 05:54:00 pm »

No problem
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« Reply #6 on: July 18, 2008, 05:56:08 pm »

still need a good name .................no idea
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« Reply #7 on: July 18, 2008, 05:59:03 pm »

creature island xD O.o? i dunno im not good with names for stuff xD
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« Reply #8 on: July 18, 2008, 06:03:09 pm »

..... i see that lol
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